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Writing IVa: Portfolio
0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals
Book reviews	0	0	8	5	3	3	19
Blog posts	15	12	23	23	15	15	105
Words	801	871	2530	2401	3475	1105	11187
TOTAL	---	---	---	---	---	---	---

1.0. Movie Reviews

1.1. Showcase [+ links]	Dates on blog (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	Notes
Toy Story	07.10.12	3	225	I didn’t know what should I write.
Kill Bill	07.10.24	5	328	I can write little longer.
Romeo and Juliet	07.11.06	6	506	I became accustomed to this movie review.
Mrs Doubtfire	07.11.24	6	411	I think this is the best.
Forrest Gump	07.12.04	10	601	I can enjoy to watching movie.
Lilo and Stich	07.12.12	10	960	I can write very long movie review but I think this is too long.
Totals	---		3031	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

1.2. Best Movie Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• I feel the best movie review is Mrs. Doubtfire. This is because the length is not too long and not too short so I think it is easy to read. And then I think I can write along the story in simple English.

2.0. Comments

Total number of comments (use dashboard)
Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Total
	0	3	7	4	5	4	23

Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Qualities of comments*[*]
Any one of your movie reviews	Forest Gump	2007.12.04	good
When did you respond to those comments?	---	I responded when I get e-mails.	---
How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	I responded immediate comments when I see it.
Any of your other posts*	Fukuoka	07.09.25	good
When did you respond to those comments?	---	I responded to those comment when I see it and I have free time.	---
How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	I responded immediate comments when I see it.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• I displayed recent comments on top of sidebar to see quickly and anyone can see it when they visit to my blog.

Additional reflections on comments

• Giving and receiving comments can be a motivation for me which makes this blog all the more interesting.

3.0. Book Reviews

	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	April in Moscow	07.10.02	86	0
2-02	The Troy Stone	07.10.10	85	0
2-03	The Jumping Frog	07.10.10	114	0
2-04	Orca	07.10.15	91	0
2-05	Run For Your Life	07.10.19	178	0
2-06	Treature Island	07.10.23	149	0
2-07	Audrey Hepburn	07.10.30	191	0
2-08	Give us the money	07.10.30	100	1
2-09	The Blue Cat Club	07.11.13	125	0
2-10	The battle of northern road	07.11.14	50	0
2-11	The winner	07.11.20	62	0
2-12	The Barcelona Game	07.11.20	76	0
2-13	Lost Love	07.11.27	73	0
2-14	K's First Case	07.12.04	94	0
2-15	Adventures of Huckleberry Finn	07.12.11	93	0
2-16	Countdown to Midnight	07.12.18	90	1
2-17	The Fidteenth Character	08.1.23	96	0
2-18	The Purse	08.1.29	120	0
---	---	TOTALS:	1873	3

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• I feel Audrey Hepburn　is the best book review. This is because I can write in detail and plain about this book and I can read little longer story for the first time so I choose this.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• Wiring blog is like a diary and custom for me. I can read and write English just about everyday. Till now, I didn't have read and write English so it was very good opportunity to up my skills. The happiest thing is I can write a many words in English.

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• I will suggest for successors that you can write English if you write your blog every day. You can study before one knows it and I think you can make friends with other people because a lot of people visit your blog. I recommend you drudge away at your blog study; you will improve your English skills. I will suggest my peers I will continue my blog so please visit my blog and let’s continue together.

Book review2-18

I read "The Purse". This book has 4 stories but I introduce about first story.
The Purse; Mark finds a purse in a train. He checks the purse and there is a photo of a girl in it. He really likes her and he finds her phone number. He calls her and he introduce about her purse. He and the girl met in Cafe. He want to talk more but she can't... so she go back home. He thinks how can he get to do. He calls one more and he ask her to meet again. He can meet her at last but she is talking all the time and he hate her. That is the problem of this story.

Dinner♡

I went to Aran Aran that we can eat as much as you like for 2,000 yen at the restaurant with my senior. She is a senior in my part time job. We are good relationship so we often go out. Yesterday, we had dinner after our part time job. We talked about lot of things school, boyfriend, friend and future. She is good senior and very kind. I respect her.
I had much foods so I overeat but it was so delicious and satisfied. I want to go there again.

Bowling

I went to the city to play bowling with my friends. I got a ticket that we can play bowling free so I ask my friend to play bowling with me. Yuka and Mai said "Of course!". Sae hesitated what to go to bowling because she has test next day but she ended up going with us. Sae was very good at bowling player! She usually not good....hahahaha! but she was very good! so we amazed and were fun. After that we went shopping because PARCO was a clearance sale. I bought lovely T-shirts and Mai bought same T-shirt. Before we went back home, we ate crepe. It was so delicious. I want to go there in spring and eat crepe again.

Book review2-17

I read "The Fifteenth Character". It's an interesting job, says Sally about her work at Happy Hills. And today is a very exciting day because Zapp the famous singer coming. Everybody is Having a wonderful time. But suddenly something goes wrong. He showed everyone his new CD but anyone stolen it so Zapp got angry and the Happy Hills' owner apologized. Sally realized that character were 15 on the floor. Anyone is wrong character. She said owner about that things and the culprit was caught. Zapp was very happy and he invited her to his concert.

iPod

This is my iPod. I decorated my iPod myself. It was difficult for me to make this. It took 1 hour to decorate it. I bought this stones at shop that is a new shop in Fukuoka. I bought too much stones so I have a lot of stones at my house. I thought I have to consider when I buy something. But I like this iPod. I will bring this iPod anywhere and anytime.

New Face

He is my new friend! He is finger puppet. When I saw him, I decided to buy him quickly. He is very cute. I called him "Su-san". It is from Suzy's Zoo. I found him at Plaza in Fukuoka. My boy friend bought too because he use in kindergarten. I selected a best one. Please call him Su-san! when you meet him. Maybe I always bring to school. I will do my best.

SaaaE's BloG: Wedding party

SaaaE's BloG: Wedding party
Your brother must be very happy and I think you spent a very busy day.

Coming of age!

Today was a coming of age ceremony in Kumamoto synthesis gymnasium. I wake up at 7 and went to beauty salon to put on kimono. My kimono was my mother's. The color is black and I like it. My mother bought me obi. It was so expensive. After I put on kimono, hairdresser make me beautiful girl....hahahaha! I went to gymnasium triumphantly. There were a lot of people ....beautiful people. I was amazed that many people were there. I took part in the ceremony with my boyfriend. After that, I met my friends high school friends, junior high school friends and same team friends. I was very happy but I can't meet Yuka because I didn't realize that she called me. I am very sorry.....
Before I went back home, the same team members went to city and eat lunch and take purikura. And then I ate crepe alone....
My mother and father came to city to meet me by car. My mother a lot of foods for me at home. We ate basashi. The photo is basashi. My brother and his wife gave me money. I was very happy coming of age day. I think I will never forget today. I want to behave more maturely from now.

New Year's Party

I went to Fukuoka to met my boyfriend by train. At 12:00 I arrived at Hakata station. He was waiting for me there. We went to Tenjin to go shopping. He knows I love go shopping. First, we went to the new shop. It was stationaly shop that he has been. I bought a calender for my mother. It was so lovely and I thought my mother like it. And then, I bought stones for my i Pod. I wanted to decolate my iPod. After we went out there, we ate lunch in dotorl. I like shrinp sand so I ate it. It was s delicious. At Plaza, we bought little bird figure because it was so pretty. I will take it to school and I will show it my friends.
At 4 p.m., I had to go back home because I had to go ne year's party. I was very sad. I said "I'm sorry......"
But The new year's party made me happy. I enjoyed the party. I want to do party with my friends. The party finished, we played bowling. Our team won the game so I gave a juice! I was happy and lucky! After that we went to karaoke. I was so sleepy but I sang a lot of songs. I was very tired.

Start!!

The last class started today so I went to shool and I met my friends. They said "Have a happy new year!!" each others. I also said it. I decided to study bery hard this year. First, I will pass the computer exam so I must study rather than I will study very hard. My first goal is this. Did you decide to do your goal? I think deciding goals It will be motivation up.
First of all I will do my best the last examinations.

Shopping

We went back my grand mother's home in Yatsushiro in the morning because my younger sister had to go calm school. My mother and I were free day so I went shopping with my mother. We were very tired but we dared to go to City. First, I wanted to buy one piece in Natural Beauty Basic but there wasn't that I wanted one piece so I gave up... Our style is same so we said same things "Cute!" "Good!".
I was watching clothes for a long time then I found a cute one piece so I bought it in Rope Picnic. I like this brand.
My mother bought a bag in Louis Vuitton. I liked the bag too!
I want to use it!

Kimono

Today was the day of taking photos before my Coming of Age celemony so I dressed Kimono. My Kimono is my mother 's kimono. I really like this kimono. The color is black like a bride. It was the first time for me to dress kimono. I have never dressed kimono so I was very tired to wear it. I thought my rib will break!
After I had pictures I went to my grand mother and father's house to celebrate New Year's day together. I had many delicious foods and I got New Year's gift. I really happy to receive it. I will use it in my seijinshiki. At night we went to hot spring near my grand mother's house. My mother, younger sister and I talked about a lot of things. Taking a bath especially hot spring relaxes me.
I am looking forward to my Coming-of-Age celemony.

Fukuoka

I went to Dazaifu Tenmangu with my family because my younger sister is examinee in this year so we went there to pay homage at shrine. Early morning, we left home for Fukuoka at 7:00. I was really sleepy. Our car crawled through the jammed traffic but we could through early because it was early morning. After we finished to pay homage at shrine, we left Dazaifu Tenmangu for Tosu premium outlet in Saga. We arrived at there about 10:30. We enjoyed shopping....
When we went to back home, my father said he wanted to eat lamen so, we decided to go to eat lamen. Then, I had to go to my part time job so we went back home quickly. I was very tired. I think today is the best hard day in this year.

New Year's Day

I went to Kengun shrine with my boy friend after my part time job finished. We saw the old year out and the New Year in Kengun shrine. It was first time for me to see the old year out and the new year in Kengun shrine. I always in my home and with my family. There were a lot of people in Kengun shrine. Some people drank alcohol and others lined up to pay homage at srine. Of course I paid homage at shrine. Then, I drew a fortune slip. I was very good luck so I was very happy to see it. I'll treasure it in my purse.