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Wednesday, January 30, 2008

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Writing IVa: Portfolio
0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Totals

Book reviews

0

0

8

5

3

3

19

Blog posts

15

12

23

23

15

15

105

Words

801

871

2530

2401

3475

1105

11187

TOTAL

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1.0. Movie Reviews

1.1. Showcase

[+ links]

Dates on blog
(yy.mm.dd)

W

Notes

Toy Story

07.10.12

3

225

I didn’t know what should I write.

Kill Bill

07.10.24

5

328

I can write little longer.

Romeo and Juliet

07.11.06

6

506

I became accustomed to this movie review.

Mrs Doubtfire

07.11.24

6

411

I think this is the best.

Forrest Gump

07.12.04

10

601

I can enjoy to watching movie.

Lilo and Stich

07.12.12

10

960

I can write very long movie review but I think this is too long.

Totals

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3031

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Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

1.2. Best Movie Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • I feel the best movie review is Mrs. Doubtfire. This is because the length is not too long and not too short so I think it is easy to read. And then I think I can write along the story in simple English.

2.0. Comments

Total number of comments (use dashboard)

Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Total

0

3

7

4

5

4

23

Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)

Qualities of comments*[*]

Any one of your movie reviews

Forest Gump

2007.12.04

good

When did you respond to those comments?

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I responded when I get e-mails.

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How did you respond to those comments?

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I responded immediate comments when I see it.

Any of your other posts*

Fukuoka

07.09.25

good

When did you respond to those comments?

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I responded to those comment when I see it and I have free time.

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How did you respond to those comments?

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I responded immediate comments when I see it.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

  • I displayed recent comments on top of sidebar to see quickly and anyone can see it when they visit to my blog.

Additional reflections on comments

  • Giving and receiving comments can be a motivation for me which makes this blog all the more interesting.

3.0. Book Reviews

Short titles
with links

Dates (yy.mm.dd)

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

07.05.16

39

1

2-01

April in Moscow

07.10.02

86

0

2-02

The Troy Stone

07.10.10

85

0

2-03

The Jumping Frog

07.10.10

114

0

2-04

Orca

07.10.15

91

0

2-05

Run For Your Life

07.10.19

178

0

2-06

Treature Island

07.10.23

149

0

2-07

Audrey Hepburn

07.10.30

191

0

2-08

Give us the money

07.10.30

100

1

2-09

The Blue Cat Club

07.11.13

125

0

2-10

The battle of northern road

07.11.14

50

0

2-11

The winner

07.11.20

62

0

2-12

The Barcelona Game

07.11.20

76

0

2-13

Lost Love

07.11.27

73

0

2-14

K's First Case

07.12.04

94

0

2-15

Adventures of Huckleberry Finn

07.12.11

93

0

2-16

Countdown to Midnight

07.12.18

90

1

2-17

The Fidteenth Character

08.1.23

96

0

2-18

The Purse

08.1.29

120

0

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TOTALS:

1873

3

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • I feel Audrey Hepburn is the best book review. This is because I can write in detail and plain about this book and I can read little longer story for the first time so I choose this.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • Wiring blog is like a diary and custom for me. I can read and write English just about everyday. Till now, I didn't have read and write English so it was very good opportunity to up my skills. The happiest thing is I can write a many words in English.

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • I will suggest for successors that you can write English if you write your blog every day. You can study before one knows it and I think you can make friends with other people because a lot of people visit your blog. I recommend you drudge away at your blog study; you will improve your English skills. I will suggest my peers I will continue my blog so please visit my blog and lets continue together.

Tuesday, January 29, 2008

Book review2-18

I read "The Purse". This book has 4 stories but I introduce about first story.
The Purse; Mark finds a purse in a train. He checks the purse and there is a photo of a girl in it. He really likes her and he finds her phone number. He calls her and he introduce about her purse. He and the girl met in Cafe. He want to talk more but she can't... so she go back home. He thinks how can he get to do. He calls one more and he ask her to meet again. He can meet her at last but she is talking all the time and he hate her. That is the problem of this story.